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 # Woes of Gottlob Graal: Umbral Gaze #0
 
-Gottlob Graal is a level-{five,ten} Watchers' Oath paladin, a satyr, bent on avoiding a faery card sharp he pissed off years ago on a regular visit to the Feywild. He fled that plane and his native Chondalwood for Waterdeep, half a continent away, taking up defenses against any and all extraplanar pursuers--- at first to learn how to avoid his creditor, but later, finding a sense of purpose and fraternity amongst his fellows as he never knew was possible.
+Gottlob Graal is a level-{five,ten} Watchers' Oath paladin, a satyr, bent on avoiding a faery card sharp he pissed off years ago during a regular visit to the Feywild. He fled that plane and his native Chondalwood for Waterdeep, half a continent away, where he took up defenses against any and all extraplanar pursuers. At first he just wanted to avoid his creditor, but later, finding a sense of purpose and fraternity in the city as never before, the satyr began to feel at home. A jovial fellow, Gottlob is energetic in his late middle-age, but finds the reckless carousing of his youth a bit beyond him now.
 
-A jovial fellow, Gottlob is energetic for his late middle-age, but finds the reckless carousing of his youth a bit beyond him now.
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-> The last time I _really_ partied, you know, I wound up in dept to an Unseelie courtier, Lord Grinbriar of the Bleeding Grove... hm, but there's no sense _worrying_ about _that_, my friend!
+> The last time I _really_ partied, you know, I wound up in debt to an Unseelie courtier! Lord Grinbriar of the Bleeding Grove... hmm, but there's no sense _worrying_ about that sort of thing, my friend!
 
 ## A Watchers' Order